National Aeronautics and Space
Administration
Manual

Read it! See it! Model it!

Suited for Spacewalking

Writer:
Gregory Vogt

Editors:
Shirley Sirota Rosenberg, Werner Janney

Illustrator:
Bruce Wolf

Tasks:
Substantive editing, copyediting

Our job

Note: this job came to us in final proofs. Although originally intended for a Fresh Eye, it soon became apparent that the book needed a total copyedit performed within Fresh Eye parameters. Substantively edit the front part of this manual for teachers so that the text flows smoothly into the hands-on student activities that follow. (The writer's words remained substantially untouched, but much reorganization was necessary.) We also edited the second half, the activities themselves; when possible, we performed experiments to make certain they work. The last step called for a real Fresh Eye on page proofs to make certain that the illustrations, which we now saw for the first time, and the text all come together smoothly.

To see the full text:
http://quest.arc.nasa.gov/space/teachers/suited